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Chapter 1: Just the beginning (WIP)

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CHAPTER 1:
The day wore on like any other day in Ponyville. The birds were flying gracefully around the town while the ponyfolk pranced around the town. Ditsy Doo was also around delivering mail to the pony’s houses around town. “Only Fluttershy’s cottage is left and I can go on home.” ,Ditsy said walking down the path to Fluttershy’s cottage. She makes to her cottage and sees that Fluttershy is already outside tending to some of the animals around. Ditsy decided to bring the mail direstly to her so she walked up behind her. “Hey Flutter-“ ,and before she could finish her statement Fluttershy flew straight into the air frightened by the unexpected visit from Ditsy. Ditsy looks up at Fluttershy, “Sorry for that Fluttershy, didn’t mean to scare you or anything. Just wanted to bring over your mail.” Ditsy pulls the mail out of her sack and Fluttershy comes back down. “I’m sorry about that. Wasn’t expecting to see you today Derpy.” ,She smiles at her and takes the mail. Ditsy answers back in a rebellious tone, “My name is Ditsy Doo not Derpy.” “Oh I am terribly sorry Ditsy.” Fluttershy apologized to her and gave a few bits. “Thanks for the mail Der- I mean Ditsy.” ,She goes back to tending the animals of the forest again.
Ditsy puts the bits in her pocket and walks off back through the forest. “Wonder if I can get something from Applejack on the way back” ,she thinks to herself when she hears a familiar sound. “I recognize that sound..... But us can’t be him.” ,she said going to where the sound is. She stumbles through the bushes and trees and a blue phone booth pops up out of thin air. “It is!” ,she lightly whispers as she gets excited. A brown pony comes from inside the booth and steps out on to the ground. “Ahh, feels good to be back in Equestria.” ,he stretches out a bit groaning as his tense muscles relax. Ditsy jumps out of the woods soon afterwards and tackles him to the ground, “Doctor!!!” She nuzzled him extremely happy to see him. “Oh hey Derpy.” , he says rather surprised she still remembered him. “How have you been lately?” , the doctor asked picking himself back up from the ground. “Oh doctor I have been doing great here in Ponyville” ,she says almost instantly “Twilight and them got Discord on our side now for good thanks to Fluttershy and a whole bunch of other things.” “Discord?” ,he says questioning who he was. Ditsy looks at him, “Yeah, he was locked away in stone for a long time cause of his constant disorder all around Equestria. He broke free a while back and terrorized Ponyvile saying ‘This is the Chaotic capitol of Equestria’ and things like that.” ,she said shivering at the last part. “But enough about here…..” ,she grabs his hoof “Come on you must be starving from the trip here.”
Alright guys this is a story I thought of while at work and I decided to make a story. If you follow me on tumblr then you knew this already but for you all on here here is the first part to the story.

Dont know how many chapters there will be nor who will be in it or if I am going to make characters for it myself.

Hope you guys like this portion of the story. There will be more sooner or later XD

Derpy nor Doctor belong to me!!!
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Well, this is certainly an interesting story, as you know I am a brony. I cant wait to read more.

Is your character going to appear? I hope so, I'd like to know how you bring out his story.

By the way, my character, Dominic, has a huge crush on Derpy. (In short, :icondominicthepegasusplz: :heart: :iconderpy-hooves:)