Chapter 1 As night fell over the little forest town of Hollow Shades and everypony went into their homes one pony in particular had different plans. Hoof clatter rang around the buildings as the pony ran across the cobble stone streets to a merchant near the center of town. She gets to the door of the merchant’s shop and opens it violently forcing the candles that lit the store to go out. The pony stood at the door as the merchant appeared from behind a curtain behind the desk. “Why hello there traveler, what brings you to my shop at such a late hour?” He asked as he went to the candle at his counter top and lit it to show the numerous items he had on display behind him and within the counter top itself. The unknown pony walked slowly to the counter top and showed the merchant a picture of a bright, translucent gem. “I heard through some pony in Manehattan that you had
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